OUTLINE:

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  [x] daeng in rut
  
  • [x] wakes up… scenting… choking low key
  • [x] yushi asking for more and daeng gives more before he goes. pause
  • [x] like one round of sex? daeng fighting alpha brain. yushi is being strange
  • [x] yushi is aggressively pleased afterwards
  • [x] longer intro
    • [x] mind hazy through rut
    • [x] anxiety about alpha-isms
      • [x] how yushi would feel,. and he’s incorrect.
    • [x] hints of conflict? so vague because theyre having sex.
    • [x] better place for doyoung comment
      • [x] how he ingests the teasing
      • [x] neurotic but only in the worst way possible
        • [x] maybe fit it into scene 2
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  [x] yushi is being interesting. something with the glasses idk….
  
  • [x] clingy during a live
  • [x] clinging during dance practice
  • [x] intimate domesticity stuff
  • [x] conflict and feelings are more…. daeyoung centered
    • [x] more conscise?
    • [x] some things can be left for chap 2
      • [x] vaguely setting things up….
    • [x] feelings about sion
    • [x] pack dynamics
      • [x] riku and family and mediating
      • [x] how the pups are coping. theyre fine.
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  [x] the first time daeyoung notices something is weird is when theyre in bangkok
  
  • [x] muay thai
  • [x] efrgthntr4h3ge
  • [x] afterwards yushi is obsessed with his biceps
  • [x] can you show hyung how strong you can punch? you should get into boxing, daeng
    • [x] lol hyung im an idol i cant
    • [x] ….man i guess
  • [x] some more self deprecating things about being an alpha/anxieties
    • [x] fear,. of being too strong.
    • [x] less sex-focused idk
    • [x] doyoung comment ?
      • [x] how he ingests the teasing
      • [x] neurotic but only in the worst way possible
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  [x] yusion return from a schedule and yushi goes wahhh my alpha >_<
  
  • [x] glasses thing
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  [x] rut adjacent stuff?
  
  • [x] like. anal sex.
  • [x] yushi wants to be held down and daeng is literally like ?
  • [x] ending.,.,… more tortured…..
    • [x] slower pacing
    • [x] more build up, heightened alpha passion
    • [x] comedown and realization
      • [x] emphasis on dy comment
      • [x] bigger contrast between daeng catastrophizing and yushi indifference
    • [x] more somber ending line or at least hinting at drastic miscommunication
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  [x] first scene … idk where they are
  
  • [x] talking to riku about problems
  • [x] yushi has started to become more docile recently. which wouldnt be strange if not for the fact its only around daeyoung
  • [x] feelings about sion
  • [x] pack dynamics
    • [x] riku and family and mediating
    • [x] how the pups are coping. theyre fine.
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  [x] paint. vid
  
  • [x] before
    • [x] daeng close to rut and yushi being a menace
      • [x] tonkatsu club
    • [x] scare saku off? at least for now?
      • [x] daeng is a little less anxious with the pre-rut close but yushi is being conniving
  • [x] the shoot
    • [x] daeyoung competitive
    • [x] mama riku
      • [x] japanese line fighting
    • [x] daeyoung being nice to yushi; yushi overjoyed at being manhandled
      • [x] physical fighting low key
    • [x] daeyoung vs sion
    • [x] ryo vs mama
    • [x] yutdaeng tension
      • [x] in each other’s faces… backing him up against a wall…
    • [x] family feels
      • [x] onri brawling
      • [x] saku like a drowned cat
    • [x] daeyoung’s anxiety and inner alpha fight for control ? some stuff. yushi is relentless and this pre-rut will be a tough one
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  [x] yushi is being a fiend again. hinting for more. during a rut, maybe.
  
  • [x] the hyungs: he has always been like this
  • [x] daeng: ?
  • [x] the fans have noticed yushi staring LMAO. and getting super excited when daeng comes around. embarrassing….
  • [x] I think they actually have a talk at one point
    • [x] yushi is surprisingly honest. i can handle you. daeyoung kinda believes him. rut haze.
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  [x] isac
  
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    [x] yushi all over him.
    
    • [x] TEASING in a normal manner. daeng is whipped .?
      • [x] But also worse By the way. LIKE AUDIBLY. IN THE MIDDLE OF ISAC
    • [x] that clip where yushi pushes him over Yeah
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    [x] during the shooting team…. soccer team group cuddle…. daeng knows he’s being goaded on, like, realistically. but anxiety stuff…. ugh
    
    • [x] beef with inner alpha
      • [x] how yushi hates asking. how daeyoung hates making assumptions. it’s engrained in all of the that alphas are vicious and even in an event swamped with them, he’s big enough that most idols naturally give way…..
      • [x] he needs to have permission. he needs to know what he’s allowed to have. again, the line between condescending and . whatever the innate thing is
        • [x] not specifically nt/nd but yes, actually, that’s what it is
      • [x] hurts, mark, half a bond…. yushi can be compulsive about these things. about daeyoung.
    • [x] yushi eye contact. menace
    • [x] he gets worse while watching the hyungs do the um shooting thing
      • [x] pushing… pushing
        • [x] one time daeyoung pushes back and yushi just let’s him. which is the um. breaking point of it.
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    [x] they talk for a bit at one point tho… bathroom meeting ? IDK
    
    • [x] soooooooooooo……….
    • [x] even when yushi wants to talk. daeyoung has to be the one to start it off. hyung. please just tell me what you want.
    • [x] i have been telling you. i meant what i said during your rut. you always listen to me.
    • [x] daeyoung asks. what do you want me to do if i cant control myself.
      • [x] yushi: then dont control yourself
    • [x] daeyoung tries to think what sion hyung would do, maybe. i dunno. something to connect these anxieties and insecurities…..
      • [x] stuff that was brought up in the sion thing
        • [x] DAEYOUNG FIGHTING FOR HAVING AN OPINION. which yushi naturally goads him into. as always.
        • [x] He’s an alpha who puts the prosperity of the pack and the pups and even the hyungs over his own well-being, almost to a fault, so self-sacrificial
        • [x] Something about how like. why daeyoung loves him, why he courted him. why yushi accepted
          • [x] because you want me to be myself. because you care about what i want. because you dont want me to be an omega or something small, etc
          • [x] yushi is not open like this even with him, but in this bathroom stall, he says it. i love you, daeyoung. if that wasnt obvious.
        • [x] hierarchy…. things.
          • [x] REMEMBER WHEN SION HYUNG SAID HE’S NOTHING TO ASPIRE TO.
        • [x] daeyoung is too violent, too big, too scary. thats what everyone says. but yushi hyung holds his cheek in two much smaller hands and kisses him. i think you’re the gentlest person ive ever met. what do i have to be afraid of.
        • [x] hyung, sometimes im afraid of myself. what i can do to you. i never asked to be an alpha…..
        • [x] but i love you, alpha and all. idk. you’re good. youve always been the best to me. no one’s better for me than you.
      • [x] daeyoung doesnt cry but he sniffles and yushi reaches up on his tip-toes and kisses him. see, youre a crybaby. what could you do to me.
        • [x] daeyiung, through tears. so much. he tightens his hands on his waist. i could do so much to you, hyung. i could eat you.
        • [x] hes trying to be scary but yushi blushes like he wants it. presses his hips against daeyoung’s. can you tell me, alpha, how youd eat me.
        • [x] daeyoung scents him. not here. kinda pushing it off. but yushi;s eyes twinkle?
          • [x] or do they get off together in a bathroom stall.
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    [x] daeyoung realizes just how much yushi meant his words when he makes that final goal, when the alpha sweeps his mate up into his arms
    
    • [x] when we get home, alpha, i want you to reward me
    • [x] okay, hyung. i will.
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  [x] yassssss sex
  
  • [x] maybe a little talking. or goading. whichever yushi decides is more effective
  • [x] riling daeng up. cmon puppy, arent you a big strong alpha?
  • [x] daeng eats yushi out until he’s gasping lol
  • [x] rough anal sex. dom play. rough housing.
    • [x] yushi wanting to be held down and goading daeyoung on so he gets rougher
      • [x] a little bit of fighting for dominance
    • [x] on his tummy and holding him down by the throat,. god. yushi-yah, it’s like you were made for my knot
    • [x] wrestling hyung into submission. which is what he wants
    • [x] scenting. like almost using teeth. daeng is a smidge from losing control which makes yushi come
      • [x] because he is still a good boy 🙂
    • [x] creampie who cheered
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  [x] yd cuddling heheheheheheeeeee affectionate yuchi., like a cat
  
  • [x] what good is a big alpha boyfriend if he doesnt use me
    • [x] daeyoung sighs. at least hyung keeps him on his toes.

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